Here is my preliminary research.
Wednesday, September 17, 2025
Monday, September 8, 2025
Critical Reflection
Here is my critical reflection.
Behind-the-scenes
Here is a our behind-the-scenes footage and images for the project. Maxine created this document.
Filming Schedule
Here is our filming schedule.
We made our filming schedule on an app called "Notion". It was very quick and easy for our group to get organized.
Location scout & Risk Assessments
Here is my teams location scout and risk assessment. Arnold was in charge of this.
(Max’s House) | |
Location Link: | Google Link |
Events in scene: | Interviewing |
Pros of location: | Versatile, easy to set up lighting, nice quiet place to record and focus |
Cons of location: | There are dogs which might ruin the audio background |
Alternatives: | Kellie’s House |
Risk Assessment | |
Potential hazards: | dogs |
Evaluate risks: | Dogs could bite |
Control measures: | Put the dogs in a cage |
Responsibility: | Maxine |
Time frame: | When we reach max’s house |
Other notes: |
(School) | |
Location Link: | Google Link |
Events in scene: | What will happen? |
Pros of location: | Its large, multiple options where we could record |
Cons of location: | Noisy, Crowded, limited time, may interrupted |
Alternatives: | No alternatives |
Risk Assessment | |
Potential hazards: | Could get hit by a ball or crash into something |
Evaluate risks: | Might interrupt student |
Control measures: | Be aware of surrounding |
Responsibility: | Arnold |
Time frame: | By the time we reach school |
Other notes: |
Storyboard
Here is my teams storyboard. Maxine drew them and I scanned it using Camscanner.
Thumbnail storyboard:
Thumbnail Research + Development
The thumbnail above shows a mirrored image contrasting between two person whom I believe is the same person, the other half of the image is a woman overlayed with red tint which connotates evil, paired with the ominous title “what Jennifer did” it leaves the audience wondering if she aka “Jennifer” did something bad. I think we could take inspiration from the title and how the image is set up
Script/Screenplay
Here is my teams script. Maxine and I completed this together.
PROJECT TITLE: The Illness That Wasn’t
GROUP MEMBERS: Maxine, Arnold & Kellie
DATE STARTED: 08/12/25
SCENE HEADING
(INT. BLACK SCREEN - 911 CALL - NIGHT)
SHOT NUMBER: 1
DESCRIPTION:
[The first and opening scene starts off with a recording of a disturbing 911 call. A man, struggling to get his words out, is trying to call for help because he’s trying to get away from his girlfriend. The conversation over the phone goes back and forth for about 30 seconds, before he gets cut off. His girlfriend overhears and finds out what he’s trying to do. We can hear the couple begin to argue and fight for the phone, when all of a sudden, the line ends. We hear the officer try to call out for him but no response is given.]
DIALOGUE:
Paula W (Police officer): | “911, what is your emergency?” |
Daniel (boyfriend): | “S-something’s not right. I can’t move, I can’t get up…SHE’S TRYING TO KILL ME!” |
Paula W: | “What is your location sir?” |
Daniel: | “I’m gonna die, I need help, please! Quick!” [heavy breathing, muffles] |
Paula W: | “Help is on the way to you right now okay? Just stay calm and keep talking to me on the phone, can you do that for me?” |
Daniel: | “I can’t make it…she’s here I can’t” [shaky voice, sniffling] |
Paula W: | “What’s going on? hello?” |
Ava (girlfriend): | “What the hell Daniel?! Give me that phone” [wrestle noises] [phone ends] |
SCENE HEADING
(INT. DARK OFFICE ROOM - DETECTIVE ROBERTSON INTERVIEW - NIGHT)
SHOT NUMBER: 2
DESCRIPTION:
[The next scene cuts to an interview with detective Robertson. He begins to briefly assess the situation for the audience, as well as providing information regarding Daniel’s girlfriend. He explains how he’s never seen a case this crazy before and this was a huge breakthrough in his career. He talks about how this generation continues to commit unthinkable acts. How concerning their mental health is. He says his colleagues all were astonished by the case.]
DIALOGUE:
Detective Robertson | This case.. is quite unique, to say the least. I’ve never seen a case quite like it. |
Detective Robertson | To say that this case astounded us would be an understatement. I mean, this is complete.. unstable… psychopathic behaviour, and she hasn’t even graduated yet! |
Detective Robertson | It’s hard to grasp that a woman of this age could even think about doing something this cruel, to someone she claims to be in love with. It’s terrifying really..This case is like something you’d see out of a horror movie! |
Detective Robertson | What we’re dealing with here is borderline personality disorder, dependent personality disorder, and Factitious Disorder Imposed on Another (FDIA). |
Detective Robertson | Ava couldn’t handle the thought of Daniel ever leaving her, so she took matters into her own hands. |
Detective Robertson | The night of the 911 call was the first time Daniel was ever aware of what Ava had been doing to him for a long, long time. |
Detective Robertson | Because he decided to confront her, she thought that in that moment, there was no choice but to end it ...end him essentially. |
SCENE HEADING
(INT. OFFICE - DR MORROW INTERVIEW - DAY)
SHOT NUMBER: 3
DESCRIPTION:
[This scene will be an interview of a psychiatrist, Dr Morrow. She will assess Ava’s behaviour and mental health, giving the audience context and answers some of the confusion in this case.]
DIALOGUE:
Interviewer (Voice-Over): | “We are consulting Dr. Matilda, a criminal psychologist, to unpack the behavior of the young woman at the center of this case. |
Interviewer: | Dr. Morrow, from your perspective, how would you characterize her attachment style based on her behavior?” |
Dr. Morrow | She definitely shows traits of anxious attachment. People with this pattern often struggle with self-worth and live in constant worry that their partner might leave them. Even minor conflicts or separations can feel catastrophic to them |
Interviewer | So when she resorted to drugging him, what was driving that? |
Dr. Morrow: | It was a misguided attempt to keep him close. It’s an extreme expression of dependency — using control to secure closeness rather than risking abandonment.” |
Interviewer | Beyond attachment, her behavior also appears controlling and manipulative. Can you explain what it means in this case? |
Dr. Morrow: | Yes, she used psychological tactics to maintain dominance in the relationship. Things like guilt-tripping, twisting the truth, or making him doubt his own judgment — those are manipulation strategies we often see when someone feels desperate to hold onto control.” |
Interviewer | Based on her patterns, could she meet criteria for a personality disorder? |
Dr. Morrow: | The combination of anxious attachment, manipulation, and emotional volatility can align with traits we sometimes see in borderline personality disorder or other Cluster B personality patterns. Of course, a formal diagnosis requires detailed clinical evaluation, but the behaviors do suggest significant instability |
Interviewer | How would you summarize her psychological makeup? |
Dr. Morrow: | She’s someone who fears abandonment so strongly that she crosses moral and legal boundaries to prevent it. Her need for control masks deep insecurity. With proper intervention — therapy that addresses attachment and emotional regulation — she could learn healthier ways to relate, but untreated, these patterns can be dangerous both to her and those close to her |
SCENE HEADING
(INT. LAYLAS ROOM - LAYLAS INTERVIEW - NIGHT)
SHOT NUMBER: 4
DESCRIPTION:
[In this scene, we interview Layla, Daniel's best friend. She talks about her point of view on their relationship, and how she felt about it all along.]
DIALOGUE:
Layla | You know, I never had a doubt in my mind that there was something off with their relationship. |
Layla | Daniel’s my best friend, all I've ever wanted was for him to be happy…that’s why I stayed quiet. |
Layla | I’m just glad he’s safe now, I knew eventually something like this would happen. |
Interviewer | What do you mean when you say you knew something like this would happen? |
Layla | It’s Ava…She’s always been psycho |
Layla | Not once have I ever trusted that girl, I never wanted Daniel near her. |
A script was made for 2 psychologist but due to poor audio quality and disorganization, we did not end up using the scenes.